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Staring at the endless plains,
the man in black looked on.
His face was washed in faded red,
from the new horizon's dawn.
"It's gaining on me," he smiled,
a touch of sadness in his eye.
And with a vengeful speed,
the sun rose higher in the sky.
The reaper stood awaiting,
To collect the lost man's soul.
But the man had since decided,
he would not pay the toll.
"You'll die by the time the sun has set,"
the doctors all had declared.
But there he stood, a year since then,
and towards his death he stared.
At last the man had turned his back,
"So it's a race you want?"
He would play the bait,
and the sun would play the hunt.
He left the sun behind him,
he much preferred the night.
And so he walked forever,
his image drifting out of sight.
©2007-2009 ~OShea42
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Author's Comments

This is a poem I wrote for Father's Day.
It turned out waayyy way different than what it was at the start. I really like the idea, and I'm probably going to make a longer version later.
The idea is that the man was diagnosed to die by the end of the day "you'll die by the time the sun has set," so he races the sun, and keeps walking forever, until the sun catches him.
I'm not sure whether to take it figuratively or literally, but either way, this is definitely one of my favorite poems that I have done.

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:iconghost47:
I adore the imagery here... absolutley gorgeous

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i've got a name,
and i'll spell it out for you.
:iconantoniocardenaslopez:
I like the story a lot. It would make a good short film.

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The world is not my home I'm just a passin' thru.
:iconoshea42:
Thanks! It evolved as I was writing it, so it was cool when I finally finished the poem.
:iconantoniocardenaslopez:
You know, I'm studying cinematography and animation and I would love to make a short film about it if you granted me permission.

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The world is not my home I'm just a passin' thru.

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