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'Anywhere Else in the World'

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"Anywhere else in the world," he said,
"Anywhere else but here."
He wanted to be free of the toil, the boredom,
Of another angst filled year.

"My parents don't understand me," he said,
"My parents are such a bore."
So he packed up a bag, didn't lag,
and headed out the door.

Now 40 years later, the boy with the dream,
of seeing the world anew.
Is sitting, just sitting, outside on the walk,
wondering "What did I do?"

"Anywhere else in the world," he'd said,
"Anywhere else but here."
Now he's regretting, his lively new setting,
Reeking of liquor and beer.
Creative Writing Prompt #1.
"Anywhere Else in the World"

We had about 5 minutes to write this, so I'm pretty happy.

Kids should listen to their parents. If my kids are ever angst-y, I will smack them in the face...
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LorelaiThe4's avatar
*smiles* I will be very interested to see how you do with the prompts. I had the same class last semester and found it quite entertaining how people could go in a million different directions from the same few words. This is wonderful Charlie, my dear!